@TheDefiantPirate Ask and ye shall receive. . .
Focuses: Jury**-**Rigging should not be hyphenated as it is two separate words: Jury Rigging.
Values: If I can’t Fix it; Its not worth my time! This one is riddled with minor errors. It should read as, If I Can’t Fix it, It’s Not Worth My Time! Notice the capitalization changes as they are implemented to make the Value consistent with the rest of the Values and the document as a whole. Also, in this case, it is the semicolon that is used incorrectly as a comma is appropriate in this sentence. Further, Its should be It’s since this is a contraction of It is rather than the possessive pronoun Its.
Values: Live Every Day like it is you’re last! This one also has a few errors: it should read as, Live Every Day Like It Is Your Last. In this Value, the capitalization needs to be made consistent once again but, unlike the one I edited just above, you do want the possessive pronoun rather than the contraction here. As such, you want your rather than you’re (you are).
Weapons: Phaser type-2 should be Phaser Type-2 (for consistency) and there is a comma after Charge that may or may not be appropriate. It depends on whether something is added to the qualities after Charge. If not, the comma needs to be thrown to the trash can.
That’s all I see for now. As always, Editor-in-Chief Sparky is at your service.