Power and pawns typos

Power and Pawns is a great book. Noted the odd typo though, and thought I’d start a thread in case they can be fixed before the book goes to print.

To start the ball rolling, p16, “farming (produce) forestry” should be deleted from primary domains.

P20 “The Landsraad Hall of Oratory” should be a heading.

P56 “atreidesto” should be two words. “faked assassination attempt” should probably be “failed assassination attempt”.

P99 The last two paragraphs in the right column belong at the start of the next chapter.

P111 “peoplewho” should be two words.

P138 “ratingbased” should be two words.

Some typos I noticed from Masters of Dune

Masters of Dune p. 22, What did the Harkonen do to Geeta Nagara, last line of 2nd paragraph
“about House Nagata.” Nagata should be Nagara

Masters of Dune p. 158, Valahi, the Nagaran Home world
“Locations of Interest: Kaler, Rinumian Ridge, Vallasa,” the last come is not needed (or something is missing from the end)

Forgot the third one :slight_smile: